This is much too exciting.

Best line: "Instead, a group of actual emo kids tossed me a glare, saw that I didn’t have a black hoodie, only a grey one, and resumed their whiny conversations."Ha..

Monica freaks me out.

I love Sylv more than ever now.

Wonderful, keep it up!

Le gasp. Maria is my name too.

"“Someone who fucks you when they’re angry, well, after a while that’s all they’ll see you as. They’ll think that you’re all, like, evil because they siphon off their pain on you and it’ll ruin any shred of a relationship you ever had.”" Great lines, right there. Very true.

Cool story, keep it up

“Because I didn’t mean to say that all out loud and stuff.”-oh the itme i've siad that. "i love you." "i love you too." (oh shit.) hehe.

I like that serious note it took. Cyril thinking of Carrion. I've been there, rinsing the blood out of my hair, scremaing at them that I refuse to be their therapy. it leaves you broken everytime. I hope This triangle has a happy ending, because I don't know who I want to be with who.

just read this WHILE watching Bill & Ted WONDERFUL combo. I feel like i need to hug Cyril and Slyv. I have no idea which one though.

the beginning was like BLISS. love and love and it was NO POOR SLYV. and then he seemed like he was using Cyril.

I want to see Carrion go flip out on Slyv. I can see her freaking out on him.

And i hope for another journal entry by Slyv. soon cause i enjoyed the last one

I agree with Cyril! He needed to make sure Syl knew he couldn't just take out his frustration on him like that. Great drama addition to the plotline.

*tears* poor Sylv, poor Cyril...you better make everything turn out ok or all my hopes and dreams will ber crushed forever! I really like it! Nice way for me to start the day! Keep up the terrific work!

Whew, that last part was way hott! I reallt liked the flashback part in the beginning instead of having explain through a conversation, the glimpse into the past made it so much more personal. Keep up the awesome work!

Aw. I love Sylv so much in this chapter until the end. Well, no. I still love him at the end too... he's just a little scary and sad. Cyril is a little innocent emo...

Ah man, try to update soon... you left it on a cliffhanger!

Oh yes...Very happy. .; , Cyril's such a cutie.

I think I'm going to cry. I- I- I'm speechless. There were points in this story where I couldn't breathe I was so ... I'm not even sure what I was. Incredible. I am so in love with Sylvester... I seem to have an incurable disease that attracts me to queer guys...which would be fine if I were a guy. Anyways, your story is amazing and I cannot fucking wait for the next chapter!

Well, that sucks. Cyril (lol, loved the bit about the cussing...) finally gets some action and then gets bitten. Poor guy. Brilliant update, hope school ain't too much and you can update again soon!

-Creams-It was beautiful.

GOD! That was hot! So, will Cyril be Syl's now? Or was he just playing with him?

YAY! SEX! *whoops* Great chapter, I love the story, keep going!