Reviews for Pretty Boys and Pretty Girls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that is the most perfect ending line to this story ever. . i love . |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, big dramatic ending here. boy car keys? this is serious. this is serious business. . on to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I would've come over to Arizona and kicked your sorry booty if you ended it unhappily. (Haha. I said booty.) The ending was really, really, really creative. Hahaha. Brilliant. Brilliant. Brilliant. On to the next one! Kissies and Huggies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "“Hey, remember the first time we met?” he says. “When I told you I’d fuck you in the Mustang?” I nod mutely, unable to speak, and now his eyes are glimmering with mischief. His fingers move down to my chest, caressing. Embracing. His lips move. “You still have my car?”" Best last lines. Ever. I loved the ending. So cute and happy! The "Fourteen Years Later" at the beginning surprised the hell out of me! I honestly didn't see that coming. Monica ended up helping out afterall. I thought that was a nice touch. With her sensible shoes and all. I'm running on no sleep, but I'm happy because Sylv and Cyril are together and Cyril is the man and everything is good. I love you for the Harry Potter and sex remark. FANTASTIC story. Definitely one of my favorites. You're a wonderful author. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! It ended happy! You so kick ass! Keep up the amazing work and you'll go far! I loved the story, beginning to end! You have a way with words! |
![]() ![]() Yay! They're back together again. -sniffles- I'm a sucker for happy endings. Ha! Cyril's the man now! Woo! Hope they had fun in the Mustang. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are a goddess among goddesses. I loved the last chapter! Finished the story perfectly. But Darla died! NO! Cute ending, but Cyril and Carrion never made up? Weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg omg IT CANT BE OVER! i love this story, and it all over...*insert huge pouty face here* i still dont know what happened with carrion snapping but- eh. i'll live. its my one complaint, and it doesnt really count because i dont know what psudo/anti/thinger pills are. and and and now cyril and sylv are gonna go off and sylv is gonna a a actor or a musician, cause i said, and theyre gonna adopt a little girl named darla, and carrion and them will be inseperable! (and we'll learn all about it in the sequel, right? please PLEAS say yes. i'll love you even more then i already do, even if im not sure thats possible.) . .story! kiloveyourwritingbye! BWR |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMIFUCKINGOD! wow, i totally didnt expect that. wow. YAY! happy ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! And Cyril's the man in the relationship :O that's shockingly fun! And he's taller! Taller! Omg great ending but it's so sad 'cause it's all over... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() homigod, its over? how heartbreaking, sequelplease, ah. (maybe?) very sweet ending, the last story i read ended up as them both dying of old age, god, that was depressing. ah, so much more to the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() *lol* even so much for the cliche chapter title, I loved the ending - I thought that it was so cute and adorable! Great job~! Teeheehee, just wondering; Cyril does still have the car right? *lol* nice story love~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() T_T It's ovverr. Such an awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() -APPLAUDS!- Yay! z0mg. I'm squealing like a little school girl bitch and I feel tingly inside! HE CAME BACK! THANKYOU FOR WRITING! Yay. I loved it. You're wonderful. ]] |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! He must come back! He has to! I suspected he might leave...but damn, leave forever...no! that's just not cool. I was really surprised Ryan didn't take up Cyril's little offer. Didn't expect that. Nor did I expect Cyril to get Sylv's car...guess it was all in the title...but then again I forgot he had a sweet car. Good job. I really love this story...so update it soon! . |