oh. that was very emotional. i loved the last line. i hope it isn't serious. hang in there if it the poem was it up! i'd like to see more!

OMGOODNESS! I'm so MAD! This is the THIRD time I have tried 2 review for this poem... and it's not letting me.. so i'll just skip all the goodstuff i wrote and just tell u the summary type of wut i wrote-it was wicked awesome-lol keep it up darlin

okay, i always feel really retarted reviewing for poems cuz there's only so much u can write... But its rly well written and has just taken 2nd on my favorites list...lol i already told you all this so thats about it! Keep up the writing, its always good ta read a new 1!

finally you're writing about something a little different. It's still similar to the others but with more color if that makes any sense.

hm... thought provoking. if only life wasnt so unpredictable. good work

keep writing!