Reviews for Eve Ate It First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YES YES YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing! I completely loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds cool! Do it if you want! |
![]() ![]() Definitely interested! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i've read & reread the story & i still love it. if you were to rewrite it i'd still read it again. you're story is great & im sure it could only get better :) i mean i'm not a writer but i'm a fan of the stories you write :) - ana. |
![]() ![]() I've only read the first four chapters, but so far i'm loving it, and don't be to worried about writing a cliche, they're cliches for a reason, pardon my crappy spelling |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahhahhahahahahahah nice :D loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a fantastic job on this story! I love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet. Wish there was more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love, love love it! Fave cliche, thank you so much! And i love your name, Drops of Jupiter is one of my fave songs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job... i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job...i like so far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sighs* ok, now i can go to bed. but, not before i congratulate you on a wonderful story. The only complaint I have is the shortness of it, some minor errors (nothing that a spell-check and an extra read-through won't fix) and the sometimes over-dramatic responses of some of the characters - i think i've pointed out to you before that 'screaming' is a tad over the top in my book. but then again, that's just me. anywho, well done. i hope to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *giggles* cute. lol... i've noticed that as i read this, the later it gets, the tired-er (is that even a word?) i get, and the stupider i get comment-wise. i think its time for bed, but i can't be bothered. i'd rather stay up and finish this! well done, i'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *raises eyebrows and wolfwhistles appreciatively* spunky. ;) |