Reviews for who do you see?
Syriven chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Good. I liked the rhyming.
TheThirteenStep chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
i liked ur poem a lot. it wuz very . . . interesting. it made me think.
RavenHairedBrenna chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
I really really really like this one. It reminds me of a friend I have that moved away and changed.
Phaere chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
This is really impressive. It really flows and the words are carefully chosen and fit perfectly. Nothing seems to be out of place... aw, this is just perfect. However, I think the part

Are you lookin at my face?

Are you lookin at my body?

Are you lookin at my mind and at my soul?

Are you lookin at me

is a bit too repetive. But apart from that, it's really excellent. -Shazirah
Mel C chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
this really hits close to home. a lot of my friends say i'm 'gorgeous' but sometimes i wonder if people see the true me or the skin deep beauty me.
Neko Necromancer chapter 1 . 1/20/2002

The world is in need of angst and torture.

And you portray it with ease.
Reanimation chapter 1 . 1/17/2002
If I Could Tell You How Much Your Poems Mean To Me, I'd Be Talking For Forever. Thanks For Your Help Today. It Meant A Lot To Me. And I Could Never Review All Of Your Poems. So I Just Want You To Know That They're All So GREAT! And That I'm Going To Read EVERY SINGLE ONE!
Damia Raven chapter 1 . 12/25/2001
woah, that is a real heart-felt poem!

*applaudes* well done - i like, i like!
empty account chapter 1 . 11/18/2001
so right, as we grow we change but the person we once were is always there.
Leni chapter 1 . 4/7/2001
This was GREAT, I really enjoyed reading it.
Rug chapter 1 . 4/6/2001
Good poem, you express yourself very well. I wrote a poem a bit like this once.