Reviews for Beauty Rags
Ruarc chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I find it somewhat unfair that some people (ahem) can write pull off that kind of choppy, kind of disjointed, but still together style.

Gr, damn you, shorty. This is spiffy and I'm jealous. It's like...every stanza is a piece on its own, and each line is as well. Nifty, indeed. A few bits stick out a bit oddly (the stanza about the cards, though standing alone its quite awesome), but it's that whole relative thing... without those few bits the rest of it wouldn't seem to flow as well as it does (ie, third to last stanza, muy cool). Well done.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
I like your work, it feels soothing; like a sexy brunette walking down some stairs under soft light wanting to cuddle up to you and give her warmth.

Very human

Alan.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
great poem. i love the line 'soft and shining across the sunlight space' good job :)dropsofjewpiter
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
It’s interesting; and the format is cool; how each line works alone. But I think this as one poem felt weird, like it was a lot of little poems bunched up in one. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
deathbyeuphoria chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Wonderful. I love how chopped up it is.