Reviews for Windsong
Rozlin chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
alas, from the view point of a mother, at birth there is hope for something more, something better, however futile it may seem from another view point... by the way, i'm glad to see that you are back... you seemed to fall off the face of the earth for some time...
twistedICYjunk chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
An interesting point, but it comes off a little bit...awkwardly, almost like there's a better way you could put it.

There are some really neat lines in there, though, I especially like

"From the moment of birth,

Begins the great cycle of decay."

kate
Written chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
lovely. nice flow and rhythm to it.
fcf chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Something about this I just can't grasp, not a bad thing, most great poetry leaves something in your head without you knowing. I like this the line "suffocated by the wind," powerful stuff.
Plinky chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Wow, angsty. Nice poem - I like. Lovely imagery. Keep writing!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
I miss you, Adam...I really miss you... :(

I really liked the poem though.