Reviews for Pieces Of My World
Cloudsinthesky chapter 5 . 3/19/2006
I like the first chapter of this best, prolly cuz thats what i most relate to. But i still like the whole thing so great poem.
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
oh boy can i relate. this is good. i like it.

mushoo chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
i love the ending. i think it was perfect and very unexpected at the same time. )
Femme de Dieu chapter 5 . 3/12/2006
I'm sure we all long to go back to before and relive or change some things. You captured that thought very nicely with the kaleidoscope metaphor. It does seem like that, doesn't it, falling through colors. I love "How'd these memories turn me into who I am today?" Such a deep thought. Beautiful!
Femme de Dieu chapter 4 . 3/12/2006
These are the worst types of endings - where we truly don't know what the other person was thinking. Why can't people seem to realize that being honest and upfront is so much kinder than silence?

You captured it perfectly. Nicely done!