Reviews for Killing Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ben, shut up. You're being a control freak and it doesn't suit you. heh. with that said I read on. :) CD |
![]() ![]() I like this new ben, it really shows how little he knows about the real world. I think its great, makes him seem very real because he has to experience and learn all about real emotions. Kind of a neat twist:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() " I snapped out of my stupor and glanced back at Him." Is Adam, like, God or something? lol. Intentional or not? I like Adam's Final Thought. Humorous, though maybe it shouldn't be. :D It's like saying,"I like pillows," only applicable to the situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...neh... WHAT is WITH Ben? Gaahh.. X( CD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your Story is very good. i read 21 chapters straight before i remembered to write a review. i will continue reading your story with great intrest and enthuiasm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rooter? he wakes up only able to speak Rooter? you gotta be freaking KIDDING me! This ROCKS! great twist. :D CD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow pheonix, I'm impressed. This is your best chapter yet... I don't know what sort of meditative trance you entered when you wrote it, but it worked. As I mentioned previously, before each of the characters came off as shallow or unreal. This is almost a 180 degree turn around, each of the characters is alive. They ask compitent questions, have human responses, and hint at lives beyond their interactions with Ben. All in all, I am very impressed. Please keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snerk* Lee... *nod* I'm liking Maggie... Dmitri... not so sure. oo what happens next? :) CD |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Finaly, a new chapter. Can't wait for the next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() meh? I recognize this as 'modern world', but what the heck is with Dmitri? *is confuzzled* :) CD |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I love this story... KEEP WRITING FTP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Chapter 55! Finaly! You made me read other stories! Grr...! Grr! I did like "then the phone rang" though... I like ...s Anywho... I LOVE THE STORY! AGAIN!KEEP POSTING THE REST OF THIS STORY! 22 chapters left, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god... I love the descriptions! Ooh! Make him dance in the desert! Or... Pee in public! They are both good choices! Love it! Cannot wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snerk* Ben has such amusing thoughts sometimes... and the whole thinking part was funny. :) CD |
![]() ![]() I like. I think this is my favorite chapter yet:) |