Reviews for Killing Me
Casey Drake chapter 63 . 9/21/2006
Ben, shut up. You're being a control freak and it doesn't suit you.

heh. with that said I read on.

:) CD
Timur chapter 62 . 7/3/2006
I like this new ben, it really shows how little he knows about the real world. I think its great, makes him seem very real because he has to experience and learn all about real emotions. Kind of a neat twist:)
supplanter-of-tomorrow chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
" I snapped out of my stupor and glanced back at Him." Is Adam, like, God or something? lol. Intentional or not?

I like Adam's Final Thought. Humorous, though maybe it shouldn't be. :D It's like saying,"I like pillows," only applicable to the situation.
Casey Drake chapter 59 . 6/25/2006
...neh... WHAT is WITH Ben?

Gaahh..

X( CD
Rayfield Noland chapter 21 . 6/19/2006
Your Story is very good. i read 21 chapters straight before i remembered to write a review. i will continue reading your story with great intrest and enthuiasm.
Casey Drake chapter 58 . 6/18/2006
Rooter? he wakes up only able to speak Rooter? you gotta be freaking KIDDING me! This ROCKS!

great twist.

:D CD
Timur chapter 57 . 6/13/2006
Wow pheonix, I'm impressed. This is your best chapter yet... I don't know what sort of meditative trance you entered when you wrote it, but it worked.

As I mentioned previously, before each of the characters came off as shallow or unreal. This is almost a 180 degree turn around, each of the characters is alive. They ask compitent questions, have human responses, and hint at lives beyond their interactions with Ben.

All in all, I am very impressed. Please keep up the good work.
Casey Drake chapter 57 . 6/13/2006
*snerk* Lee...

*nod* I'm liking Maggie... Dmitri... not so sure.

oo what happens next?

:) CD
MadCat1030 chapter 57 . 6/13/2006
YAY!

Finaly, a new chapter.

Can't wait for the next.
Casey Drake chapter 56 . 6/12/2006
meh? I recognize this as 'modern world', but what the heck is with Dmitri?

*is confuzzled*

:) CD
MadCat1030 chapter 56 . 5/29/2006
YAY!

I love this story...

KEEP WRITING FTP!
MadCat1030 chapter 55 . 5/26/2006
YAY!

Chapter 55!

Finaly!

You made me read other stories!

Grr...!

Grr!

I did like "then the phone rang" though...

I like ...s

Anywho... I LOVE THE STORY! AGAIN!KEEP POSTING THE REST OF THIS STORY!

22 chapters left, right?
MadCat1030 chapter 54 . 5/10/2006
Oh my god...

I love the descriptions!

Ooh!

Make him dance in the desert!

Or...

Pee in public! They are both good choices!

Love it!

Cannot wait!
Casey Drake chapter 54 . 5/10/2006
*snerk* Ben has such amusing thoughts sometimes... and the whole thinking part was funny.

:) CD
Timur chapter 54 . 5/10/2006
I like. I think this is my favorite chapter yet:)
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