|Reviews for Killing Me|
| Timur chapter 53 . 5/9/2006
lol, I love this chapter. Just the whole dancing around, and the first kiss. All very well done:)
Can't wait to see where this goes next.
| Timur chapter 52 . 5/8/2006
feel free to drop me a message:)
I love how often you update, this is just about the only story I'm reading right now so its nice to be able to read a new chapter a couple of times a week:)
| MadCat1030 chapter 53 . 5/8/2006
Still awesome! Not much else to say without being completely repetative (uhh... spell check).
| MadCat1030 chapter 52 . 5/8/2006
Yay! I waited all weekend (why?) to get back on the internet, and I was instantly pleased by another two chapters of this awesome story!
| Casey Drake chapter 53 . 5/7/2006
BEN! GET. IT. THROUGH. YOUR. HEAD!
Listen to Marou, she was and is your wife.
| Casey Drake chapter 52 . 5/6/2006
hunh. ouchies-full penetration... that's gotta hurt.
| Timur chapter 51 . 5/5/2006
I still think you need to work on the 2dness of your characters, but even so I find myself caring for them. Like I said before, this is a wonderful story.
I love the main character, and how human he is. I really wish you would fill out the other characters though. I know its about Ben, but I really wish I knew more about everyone else! :)
| Casey Drake chapter 51 . 5/5/2006
*hugs ben* *rocks back and forth with ben* it's ok, really, it's all right, It's not your fault, the idiot was lying... you didn't kill them... they did it for you, not because of you.
| Casey Drake chapter 50 . 5/4/2006
wow. fifty chapters of Ben goodness. *applause*
sweet. he begins to think-am I really evil? Is this my fault? What if it isn't?
| Timur chapter 50 . 5/4/2006
A very interesting story. I really love the concept and how human the characters are.
Your grammer and spelling could use some work, and maybe spend some time to make a few things a little less confusing (in general I really like the pace, but from time to time things become very hard to understand.)
As for the good points, there are many. I love the way you introduce things and use them later, like his being a mapper, and his conversations with Selena coming full circle. I also love the humanity each character exibits, some are very 2 dimensional, but the realness of their emotions make up for some that.
| Casey Drake chapter 49 . 5/4/2006
oo... PIFFLE! *hugs Ben* It. Wasn't. Your. FAULT!
| Madcat1030 chapter 49 . 5/3/2006
Wierd but good, cannot wait for chapter 50! How long are you planning it to be?
| Casey Drake chapter 48 . 5/2/2006
Meep! He has to keep Marou! She's Selena!
| Casey Drake chapter 47 . 5/1/2006
eep. this is confusing. He's married to a woma who is the basis of his wife, and is also married to another woman as well... he techinically has THREE wives! eep!
*blink* What if Hunter fights Ben for Keona and Ben LETS him win?
| Casey Drake chapter 45 . 4/28/2006
*dances, singing* I sees a loop-hole, I sees a loop-hole!
heeheehee... but will BEN find it?
hunh... can he marry Keona if he is a widower (or technically, his wife still exists, since she exists in his mind...)?
WELL, there's another!