Reviews for me and him
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
I loved the format of this, it really helps to tie it all together..Well done!
finger on the trigger chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
i fell in heart with him.

loved this piece. it makes you wish you knew someone like that. that you could be able to be.
she wants revenge chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
this is brilliant. like a rock song, or a techno song. 'me and him are the stars of the body scene' beautiful. although, every time i read the words 'me and him' i thought of my boyfriend because every time i use 'me and her' instead of 'she and i' for example, he corrects me. it drives me nuts. but then i started relating to the poem because it reminds me of us. great work. i loved it!
Look it's Sarah chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
If only it WAS real. D That would be the sex...

But that was a pretty groovy poem. :D
la derniere chose chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
This is awesome. Honestly it is. Nearly every girl who reads this is probably thinking "Wow...I wish he was mine." Even though he's fictional you do a great job of creating a character for him.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
If only he was real...