Reviews for me and him |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the format of this, it really helps to tie it all together..Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i fell in heart with him. loved this piece. it makes you wish you knew someone like that. that you could be able to be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is brilliant. like a rock song, or a techno song. 'me and him are the stars of the body scene' beautiful. although, every time i read the words 'me and him' i thought of my boyfriend because every time i use 'me and her' instead of 'she and i' for example, he corrects me. it drives me nuts. but then i started relating to the poem because it reminds me of us. great work. i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only it WAS real. D That would be the sex... But that was a pretty groovy poem. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome. Honestly it is. Nearly every girl who reads this is probably thinking "Wow...I wish he was mine." Even though he's fictional you do a great job of creating a character for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only he was real... |