|Reviews for Seven Deadly Sins|
| Sir Scott chapter 4 . 7/20/2006
Pretty good story. Poor Diegos, oh well.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| TheUnholyMint chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
I have to agree with yonder reviewers: the idea sounds nice. I read the summary and was very interested. Perhaps you could keep the diary form, because I can see it working well, but change the narrative voice. The language should really be more formal, or at least more descriptive. And the emotions we're getting at the moment lack : at the moment, the writing is rather childish, and...well, the best
Minty wrote too much againx
| Sir Scott chapter 2 . 5/7/2006
Interesting idea to have a character record how she commits the seven deadly sins.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Health, SirScott
| Sarah chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
So this is the story you were telling me about on MSN. I thought you were goin got write it lots different. Sounds pretty good so far.
| anonymous cutter chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
i think you could make a real story out of this concept instead of entrys in a diary, this is not a flame. I love the idea and would be all for reading it. You should concider the thought