Reviews for the things i can't erase
Morwain chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
i like this its good and thanks for the review
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
this is so beautiful, love the format
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
you've expressed your pain and hurt very well. I can relate to this and I'm in love with this line, 'because scars dance across the once clean wrists', great imagery. I really enjoyed reading this and the ending was very powerful and effective. nice work
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
I love this poem.

I know EXACTLY what you mean, and understand the emotions you seem to be trying to convey through your writing.

I've always wanted to use this style and never could; I'm no good at it. But you pull it off perfectly and make it seem so easy. You're going on my faves for so many reasons.

Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
Winter Reflections chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
if you had set it out better it would be a lot easier to read. it is very good.

Monkey