I read this mind consuming story all the way to the end only to see the first one. This really sucks. I can't go read it now because I know he will be with horrible Jackie in the end and I can't see Terry alive through it knowing he's going to die. I hate stories that move me so much I spend the whole day reading them with no idea what to do when they end lol.

Love reading about Will, even if he's a man-wh0re. Hope he and Tom stay together.

I love this story. I cried at the end when terry died he was one of my favorite characters. Also I was suprised about micheal cheating I didn't see his character as one who would but I guess anything could happen

"I’m not in a position to care about what he’s thinking, though, and continue enjoying my orgasm"

haha awesome, what an asshole

I loved your story, but I'm getting used to saying that lol, since so far I love all your stories. I am wondering though, if Mikey and Brett will stay together since he's away, and probably always will be. Are you thinking about having a one-shot or something about them, to see how they're doing? I want them to stay together )

~Mia

I just read straight through 'Will' and then this story and I have to say I love it. I'd love to gush over absolutely everything, but I'm sick and it's taking all I've got to sit at the computer and write this review. I love Will, I love Tom and Jamie and Brett. Sometimes I'm iffy on Michael. I can't wait for more. This is definitely going on my story alert. _

Wow. Just... wow. I started around midnight reading "Will", then moved on to this, and what can I say? It's past four A.M. and I only just finished. I still want more. I won't CHECK for more right now because I badly need to get some sleep, but damn, this is brilliant. You're amazingly talented, and I hope to be seeing more of your work. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Hey look it's sex. 9.9 I'm five.

Anyway, Jackie is a jerk, and I am hoping something happens so that he isn't with Will anymore, because I like Will. And jerks are jerks. And people you like jerk good.

Didn't notice any real typos, just stylistic changes that I might make but aren't important. Yay your excellent characterisation!

Wow, it's been a while!

I like this so far. I never finished the first Will story and I'm too lazy to go back, but I don't think I'll have too much of a problem catching up. :)

Some typo-grammar things:

*"'No, we can go TO the shops,' he argues. 'I bRought my credit card with me.'" (You're missing the to and r.)

*"Roman's father pays for tuition at a private school and bought him a car merely for graduating FROM high school."

*"His girlfriend took /days/ in labour(. or ;) I found it painful enough sitting at the hospital . . . ."

*"'Happy (e)ighteenth birthday(,) Roman . . . ."

Other than that, I didn't see any problems. I especially liked "It's so much nicer to think of them as asexual beings . . . ." because *yes*. And the word "schoolies." Hee.

So notorious, in fact, that my foster father Brett refers to Jackie as ‘the proverbial fire hydrant over which all the neighbourhood dogs have had a piss’. - Best line EVER!

Waah not Terry ;_;

Great story!

update soon

whisper

No... Terry died... I loved Terry... -sniffles. And it annoys me that Mike cheated on Brett... even though I guess I could see his point of view.

On the other hand - YES! Go Will! Fuck off Jackie and welcome in Tom! -nods head- Hell yes...

I just wish you would start the Oliver/Seth fic back up... I really enjoyed it before you took it off... -sighs-

Anwyays...Great writing, as yours always is. Keep up the awesome work!

I love Tom and Will, and am overjoyed that Tom thought about Will when thinking about his housing plans. *big fat happy grin*

Terry's funeral was sad...but thankfully not with the whole 'sob-fest-drama' cliche. Terry will always be one of my favourite characters from your stories. I'm going to miss him...

I hope we get to see more Will and Tom. Now, to check out your new fic...

gawd poor terry T_T but well i hope jamie wil be fine! And well jsut as always: loved it! XD

"Brett's ex-boyfriend"? Who might that have been? Terry's family is made up of a bunch of assholes! I hate them! I love Tom. What did that guy that looked like Jackie do?

Wonderful. Even after his passing we're still hit with classic Terry.

It's really delightful that Tom is considering Will in his housing plans.