Reviews for I am
Aetha Daemon chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
I love the message of this poem-you support it so strongly and with feeling. However, I would rid the last 'I Am' stanza fo the word 'hard' as it repeats the meaning of titanium, and is weak in this sense. Also, after 'a glass mirror' there should be a period, not a comma, just to clarify. I love the bolded words at the end, as if you slapped the table and tried to yell to convince yourself that you REALLY were what you were.
Vas Da Gama chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Very good poem.*applaudes*"I am what I am"so very true, holds meaning for us all.