Reviews for This house is not a home
bahaghari chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
That stunned me, I being so Christian and all. but the poem, the poem IS well-written indeed.
writingonpaperx chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
I love this poem! I love these lines the best :

raped by the deeds of your own misfortune

hung on a cross built with lies
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
wow! i think this is one of your best ones yet! i like how you thru in the Lords Prayer, but twisted it to fit the poem. the first half, yeah reminds me of how i should listen to family and close friends the next time i decide to latch onto something stoopid (refers to heather). love it! this is so going in my fave stories! luv ya X3
sofie chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
wow, strong and sad. thanks for posting...

I know this one really good poet, her name ia LEE HOLIDAY. you should go check her out.

smiles, sofie
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Very imaginative with your role of words! This one stands out as a little more pronounced with it's descriptions. Awesome poem!
chocohound chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Really good! Great imagery and vocabulary!