Reviews for Don't
son of frost chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
I once hurt a stranger, on purpose, to show them that I could also heal and have compassion. However, one who deceives and lies is no friend, that I am sure of. I enjoyed your literary devices such as the web of lies being a marionnette's strings. Not that I am one to speak, or that your poem was anything less than amazing, but I feel that eloquence should be a strivance for all aspiring writers. Being able to choose words that are most effective is a tool for all writers everywhere.