|Reviews for All I Got Was Sand|
| Diana Shore chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Really like the entire poem, but LOVE the last two lines.
The flow was off a little in these lines for me:
fuck the roses and the horses with the wind in your hairas a knight wraps his strong armaround your waist as you ride off into the sunset
fuck the roses and the horsesthe wind in your hairas the knight wraps his strong arms around your waistyou ride off into the sunset
Take care, D.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
wow.. very angry and well done... i love the whole beginning part and the but on one line is very cool