|Reviews for Half Awake in Crowded Streets|
| Fire of the Sky chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Wow, this is a really striking poemI love the imagery description, very well articulated. Great job!
| Janie Jones chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
i really like this poem... it's got a lot of promise and emotion. well written.
| dark stars grace chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
ahh yes, wandering the city streets, trying to find a piece of yourself you never had to begin with. thought provoking poem with a hint of tragedy-nice job.