Reviews for Tantalism
yellow pen chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
so beautiful!
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
There is something beautiful about your poetry, and its more than the words you use (which are magic by the way). I think what attracts me to your poetry so much is the optimistic nature of it. Poetry is always best when written in truth and I can feel the truth and longing between each line. Fantastic poem with a great metaphor.

Peace, Daze
Wopaloplopyop chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Aww, beautiful poem!

Cheers
Precious Death's Whisper chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Aw, this is beautiful. I like it! My favorite stanza was the first italicized one. Very good. Write on!

PDW
Avameris chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Amazingly beautiful. Very vivid metaphors. This makes me want to cry and reach for the ones I love to hold them tight.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
very vivid & oh so beautiful.
eve chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
wow, i love the sense of dispare in this sad but amazing poem!