Reviews for dotted
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Beautifully written and really sad.
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
"emotions-technically bitter", i dont know why but I think that was my favorite line out of its entirety.. It was all magnificent.
Unready chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
pleasing to the mind and soul
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
sad and very well written
Written chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
you scattered about me. wow. that was beautiful. I love the form as well.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Interesting. I love that last line. 'scattered' just seems to fit so well.
eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
i imagine the make-believeto be attainable yet

in the mornings i cry,

Amazingly great. Just a brilliant poem.
Chemically Induced chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
i really like your poetry. its fragmented, full of original, illegal-feeling word combinations. quintessential free-verse. awesome. you're the first truly skilled talented poet i've come across on this is 1 fan, for you. namarie.

love, .
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
beautiful, vague, entrancing. (you had me at hello - giggles, heart worthy.)

* noelle
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
"i imagine the make-believe to be attainable yet" lamentation of poets everywhere! I love this-it has a stripped-down feel, where each word counts. disallusioned youth at its literary best. well done.
Hax Rook chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
i. if only we knew that anywhere is inevitably . maybe dulling is important when i get there?i. dig that.

crisp and real but not drowned in blood and teen me know if you attain. please.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
i imagine the make-believeto be attainable.- and invisible optional?

ah, i love that, amazing, amazing

makes me want to run the streets and pretend everything is a poorly written script with bad animationlike it
she wants revenge chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
beautiful work. vague, but entrancing. brilliant. loved it.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Great poem. i love your writing style. good job :)dropsofjewpiter
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Interesting form (I liked the use of roman numerals)

Definitely gives the feeling of progression, either through time or emotionally. Great divisions, few people can pull that off.