|Reviews for To A Friend|
| Arichos chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
A real mix of desperation and love, this is really quiete good. I enjoyed it.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Thanks for reviewing my new poem. Your reviews means so much to me! *gives you a jar of chocolate chip cookies* yum yum!
This poem is STUNNING. It has a brilliant flow, and it says so much. I especially heart the lines:
"You've wiped away all those dirty unwanted tears"
"It's you, the one person I need most on this earth" *sigh* This one sounds romantic too!
"You saved me from my world of fear when I was really scared"
*loud applaudes*, keep writing, you're going to go far! Write on!
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
wow that was good i should show this to one of my best friends her name is "DathmiranSciFiAuthor" please check out some of her work she's the one who tolf me about FictionPress
| Arista Black chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Sounds like you've got a good friend. Nice work, and thanks for the review.
| Ashl3y5991 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
This one is so sweet, so many people can relate to this too. Nice job
| hidden sapphire chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
I really love this. It's really inspiring. You write beautifully.
| son of frost chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Any poem that's written for a friend is a good one. So, don't think otherwise, but I have a few things that I didn't think quite fit in. It seemed that you added some words that didn't add to the poem. The last line especially threw me off. I don't think that you needed that "and". Otherwise, I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed well, and the rhyming fit in perfectly.
| plummet chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
That's so sweet. True for you, and very well-written. Great work.
| Tenebrific chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
great poem, a shining example of a friend as well
| free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
aw so cute! Nice job
| prettygoldfish chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
You are very blessed to have such a great friend!
A very nice poem to tribute your feelings towards her.
| Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Great poem. i love your writing style. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
| Kenshinswife chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
I really do love this poem, you are such an awesome writer and I don't care if you were distracted, you are the best! I will also always love your rhymes, you always think of the ones that haven't been used a million times, I love you bestest friend! And mark is a weirdo to get mad at the word bestest.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Beautiful tribute to your friend.