Reviews for Hands Down
Jay chapter 24 . 6/18/2015
I tried to like this story but it's just fucked up, besides I like Nixon better anyway.
Tasman01 chapter 24 . 11/9/2014
Such a great story! Didnt expect the ending at all, but it was a great one. Im usually not one for multiple partners or infidelity but in this story it all ties in so well.
Joaquin chapter 12 . 10/2/2014
Megan the nurse seemed surprised to see Nixon in Frey's hospital room, so how did she have his pills on hand?
Joaquin chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
Considering that Janie isn't that far along, wouldn't drinking harm the baby? I don't know if I missed something where she was actually drinking soda or something.
semantics chapter 24 . 1/19/2014
Wow is all I can manage. I so super super super super sad that Nixon is out of the picture but I just love these stories where the unexpected happens. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, it has been an absolute blast reading it. I still can't believe Gavin was such an a** especially since he and Frey have practically been friends since forever. But I loved how you switched the POV for the epilogue, it was a really refreshing change. I would love to read a little about Janie's adventures and her plans; I love how well you written her character, how she really became this strong, independent young woman. Such an inspiration. But most of all, even now, I can't believe how much Nixon has changed, and I think it's stories like these that fuel girls' penchant for bad boys. Anyway loved this story! Great job!
semantics chapter 23 . 1/19/2014
I am super super confused. I'm still not too sure who I want Frey to end up with. I thought for sure Cameron, but then Nixon's confession just had me and hsiahwjdjbshx I am super super confused. I hope there is a sequel for this story. I am also scared to hit the epilogue button because I don't want their story to end...
semantics chapter 20 . 1/19/2014
I can't believe so many things. 1st: Nixon is sick, and 2nd: Frey ends up with Nixon. But from reading your authors note, it sounds like it isn't the end of relationship woes for Frey. Nixon/Frey was enticing in the beginning, but now I'm hoping Frey ends up with Cameron. Fingers crossed!
semantics chapter 16 . 1/19/2014
This story is more than 7 years old but it's still a gem! I honestly have no idea who Frey is going to end up with... At first I really thought Nixon, but what Ant said was right. I'm really looking forward to reading the ending!
MiranDuranDa chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
I'm confused. $15? If you work as a tutor for a public college, you make $10. If you work for a private company you make $20-35. When I did private tutoring I STARTED at $20 for a subject I wasn't that confident in. Privates usually go for between 20-60/hr dependin on the subject. If Frey's tutoring him in ALL subjects AND he's such a nightmare that shools won't touch him you're starting to look at the 60-80 range. Top that off with the fav that he's ridiculously rich and $15/hr is completely unreasonable.

Also, as a med student, the nerd in me wants to point out that the hospital wouldn't be able to do anything for his arm. It's bruising. It needs to go away on its own. It wasn't dislocated since he can obviously still move it, so there's nothing to be done.

Sorry if this read as a flame, it wasn't intended to be, just nitpicking
Remi chapter 24 . 10/16/2013
That was a very, highly, immensely enjoyable story I just read. Complex subjects, good narration, fleshed-out characters, hot sex scenes. You did a really good job in making readers enter the character's life and want to confort them.

I enjoyed the fact that even though they broke up, Frey and Ant ended up friendly enough to have a nice chat. Even Nixon, who first appears as a reppelent asshole proves to be three-dimensional and nice.
A really repellent asshole would be this jackass Gavin
sdfsdf4345 chapter 24 . 9/14/2013
Oh wow - this really was great. I loved how you showed that Nixon is just as vulnerable as all of us.
So happy with Cam and Frey. I adored Cam from eat back when he was first introduced.
I do wish though that we'd had some kind of resolution as to the whole Gavin thing, as well as Janie's pregnancy. I really enjoyed the fact that you highlighted that other people - not just main characters - have their own issues too.

Thank you for a great read!
sdfsdf4345 chapter 18 . 9/13/2013
man this is really depressing me about cameron. :( him and frey just seem so much more preferable. nixon hasn't given us much reason to take to him.
oh well :(
morningstorm70 chapter 24 . 9/3/2013
Was a good story looking forward to reading more of your works
JustME chapter 24 . 1/30/2013
awesome story! thx for writing and uploading :)
yaoi fangirl chapter 24 . 12/31/2012
-weeps- this was so awesome i didn't want it to end!
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