|Reviews for We've Got A Big Mess On Our Hands|
| tenna shut up chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
TRL. Xena. the emo song. when emo was a thing. GAH. good times. I like Lorraine :)
| MissKukyMonster chapter 23 . 5/23/2012
Haha the end of that story just made me go awwwwwww - Haha anyways, that was a really good story, I really enjoyed it! Jayden and Lorraine are super cute together! Thanks for sharing!
| Mandi chapter 7 . 5/5/2012
I loveeeee this story so far! It's really creative and it makes me laugh. :) Then again, everything makes me laugh. Oh, by the way... Africa's kinda not a country. ;) lol
| anonymous chapter 23 . 5/4/2012
Thank you for making me laugh so much :)
| dreeming chapter 23 . 1/24/2012
BEST. ENDING. EVER.
I love Lorraine, I LOVE Jayden, I love JayLor, and their crazy bunch of friends, and I love Jack. Even though I'm a bit disturbed with that crazy phase that 7 year old is going through o.0
But anyway, I can't wait to read his little story sequel, if you're still planning on it *wanders off to check*
| paperandink13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Impressive: every character has their own unique voice, personality. Usually you can't tell who's talking unless the writer says, "X said," because the characters are mixed and blurred together.
| julianmarq chapter 23 . 11/17/2011
This was such a funny and endearing story. Loved it.
| balloonfista chapter 23 . 11/4/2011
I read this long ago and smiled like a loon when I found it again :D :D :D
That was sooo cute 3
P.S. adored your summary by the way!
| Rosedreamer101 chapter 23 . 9/15/2011
Hahaha i love this ! i love jayden ! :D he's hilarious. XD you should change the genre of this story to romance AND humor :D i laughed so much XD
| elsa chapter 3 . 9/13/2011
SO, I'm reading that story for the second time in less than a year and I'm enjoying it A LOT :D This story is so much fun! I didn't remember Lorraine was so.. I don't even know how to describe her but I adore her and all her non-rebel attitude. You pictured her perfectly! Jayden is also a super character! I think I said that before, that in my opinion those two characters are much better than the other ones. In a way, it's normal since there are the main characters, but I'm repeating coz I love 'em! The two points of view are great and have true and unique personalities -haha! This is great. It's a shame you don't write anymore but since the re-reading is veeeryy pleasant I still have a big mess on my hands to read (haha, that's not very funny but I needed a way to conclude my review!)
| mybeachhouse chapter 23 . 9/4/2011
Really enjoyed this story! It was fun!
| gnomie chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
sigh bk 2 reread this- its weird whatta change and how relaxed she is from them from the start to finish xx
| gnomie chapter 20 . 8/4/2011
ArwH! this is actually one of the best stories i hv evaaaaaaaaaa red :P
| gnomie chapter 16 . 8/4/2011
Team Jayden :)
| use.less.woman chapter 23 . 7/20/2011
There were several moments while reading this story that I was not only laughing out loud, but laughing so that I was about to shed tears and needed to get myself under control so that I could keep my eyes open to continue reading. I am talking slapping my leg (very unlady like) and grasping for air here!
Thanks for this refreshing story. I truely enjoyed reading it.