|Reviews for surreal|
| La Terraza chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I love it.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Aw, that's really sweet. I really like it.
| B. M. Sandy chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
beautiful. i love it!
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
how did i not review this before? god that's insane. because this poem is so incredible. i love the first stanza. . . and the last line. this was very sweet.
| coldsunlight chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
i absolutely love that.
| Nivek Relleom chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
one of the best pieces i've read on here.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
"oxygen is overrated" - that is fantastic (yet, strangely familiar)! lovely, lovely line and just addictive in every sense; this poem is a drug, i swear.
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
this was interesting. I loved "oxygen is overrated". that was a great line. Very good. keep it up.
| Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
great poem. i love the line 'oxygen is overrated' and 'while i noted vividly' amazing job :)~dropsofjepwiter~
| wind up car in motion chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
i love the line "the ashes"
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
'as the world ignited in your eyes-' Very strong line. Loved the continuous metaphor throughout.