Reviews for Fate
Chaotic.goth chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
i like this poem... it was good. keep up the good work!
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Charity F chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
A lovely poem...yet again! The emotion, feelings all swell like the tide here...and yes, you guessed it - the flow! loved it!

HgBookworm chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
I think that I can finally see how love can make you long to have someone by your side at all times. Excellent work. -HgBookworm
Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
A nice poem. Says quiet a lot with few words.

Nice themes, I may carry on wandering down these. Only 90 to go, after all
OneReflection chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Very good Story I like it very Much, i wish I could write like you do
Arcane Hero chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
This is sweet! I would have reviewed the poem at the top of the list, but I tend to lose track of myself when reading long things..its just too late, but I thought it rude not to review quickly. Both poems reminded me alot of Pride and Prejudice.
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
i can relate to this poem. i like the way it is written.

thank you very much for reviewing my work! i hope to read more of yours soon! :D

Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
With the last line, You express wisdom beyond your years.
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Very nice, awesome write.
Sub Form of Human chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Strong emotions put into this poem as usual. I like the fact that your poetry is able to have a good impact on the reader.
BellonaFlayreRiver chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
i heart this so much. you expressed your intents through description and emotion. not to mention i had almost the same experience (from what i can tell) just a day ago. lovely.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Aw cute. I love it. It's so cute witha hint of sarcasim in the begining and then geuinity later on. (I hope that's a word) Great job. I love it.
review chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
not bad. actually. quite good.
mac1012 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Nice work! Lovely... Expresses the thought fairly well.. ;D

Keep it up!
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