Reviews for Of Fools and Failures
Liliot chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
Whoa, really nice piece here! The line that stood out most to me was "Pain reclining upon a wretched, burning throne." Such great imagery, I love it.
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
"So that a repaired love might reflect a joyful soul

For I am weary of fragments

Reflecting torments

Of fools and failures"

Yeah... me too. Well done. (steak or stake?)

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I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Impressive, as usual! I especially liked the 4th line of the 1st stanza and the first four lines of the 5th stanza.

Matt, you continue to amaze me with everything you write. I am yet to be dissapointed. Keep up the great work! _
Secretly-In-Love chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Wow that was a great poem... i like it... i would also like to say thanks for the review you sent me to my poem Will someone make my dreams come true?... so thankz alot it spock to me.
JagerCloud chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Deffinately and amazing poem once again. It is incredible how you describe such things in such a perfect way.