|Reviews for The Fall of the Dragon King|
| HoneySpace chapter 16 . 5/8
Agdhdhjdjsksksjj thank you so much for sharing this story! Its brillant and right now i am made so speechless that I have no idea how to compliment you of your writing skill and your story. Needless to say, I am so so glad to have found this gem. Thank you!
| Darkheartsfiction chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
The romance seemed almost too perfect between them. They found no flaws in each other which made it kind of unrealistic, and problems only occurred whenever something related to the main plot was happening. Despite that, I still liked it.
| Feb chapter 16 . 12/30/2016
A very interesting and fun story to read. I love all your stories, keep it up! :)
| Natto'n'Chibiko chapter 16 . 10/4/2016
Amazing fic. I really loved it. I read it in one go !
I especially loved the way you wrote Mora and Hadrin's relationship, they love each other deeply and we can feel it. It feels realistic. It really is an amazing story, bravo :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/14/2016
Firstly, I think you did a great job on the technical aspects of this story! Your grammar and diction were precise, and you clearly demonstrated your desire to write about the unexpected. However, I had a couple of things I'd like to point out about the relationship between Mora and Hadrin: while it was definitely meant to be sweet, and it came across that you were trying to write it that way. However, I can't help but wonder if in your first draft of this story, Mora was female. In many interactions between Mora and other characters, Mora exhibits multiple stereotypes of a typical female lead character/love interest: the younger and inexperienced-in-bed blushing bride; the emotional sensitivity (in this case manifested in a special power); the bitchy competing love interest; there are other stereotypes present as well. Additionally, the interactions about Mora and Haldrin's relationship display instances of misogyny, even though Mora is a man. Mora in one instance tells Halvar that he is obedient to the will of his husband; he is expected to give his body to the prince, as part of his marital duties; he is usually only considered by other characters to be an extension of Hadrin, or a means to an end (in this case the end to world destruction). Mora is even described as effeminate in multiple instances. I recognize that you were attempting to be inclusive of an LGBTQ relationship, but unfortunately some unfortunate tropes were simply put onto a man, rather than explored extensively or not included at all.
| Materic Estrada chapter 16 . 6/11/2016
I love all your stories, as different they are one from the other. I first, I found Space Cadet to be entertaining and tried to find more of your work; now I've come to love the Wizard Prince and the books before this. I'd love to buy them as paperback if you ever decide to publish them or if some smart editorial house finds your treasures and publish them. Best wishes for your writing gift.
| Drengade chapter 16 . 3/20/2016
Well done again, you consistently create characters i cannot help but love. The setting for this story was wonderful and the plot and relationships played out perfectly to fit it, as always you have brought me a very enjoyable experience.
| MissLollee chapter 16 . 5/1/2015
Goodness i love your story!
| LightArray chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
Momsdarksecret, I'm a bit surprised when I'm reading this story without any clue about it. I thought the story would be about dragons fighting each other when I saw the title. But this is really great! (y) I'm so touched with Mora and Hadrin's love to each other. 3 I love the flow of the story. You didn't make me stop reading it. Great! You're one of the best gay(m/m) auhtor! (y) Thanks for making these stories free in this site. 3 I'm looking forward for many stories from you, Great author. :)
| Halimede chapter 16 . 3/16/2015
Very nice! Stressful too! I feel bad about the babies though and wish there could have been another way. It just seems a bit twisted to rejoice or take satisfaction in anyway about the death of a child in the womb. And I feel like not enough sensitivity was taken with the subject. Idk, just my personal opinion. Loved the fic, the romance was lovely and gorgeous.
| SpaceTurtle chapter 16 . 2/19/2015
I REALLY enjoyed this tale! Very well thought out history and some fantastic characters, some bland and difficult to understand characters as well but overall they where great!
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/15/2015
This is easily one of the most amazing and stunning stories I have ever read. You're an excellent writer.
| lea chapter 12 . 12/14/2014
.. I like Leilan much better.
| Annie Magus chapter 16 . 12/13/2014
Enjoyed this very much and looking forward to reading your other stories. Thank you for writing!
| Kirihime chapter 16 . 8/2/2014
A beautiful story. I love the way the story flowed. It was beautifully crafted and well thought out. Thank you for such a wonderful story.