i loved it please write more please... you cant end it like that. please make more...

That was so well done. seriously, I loved it. Fantastic story. Brilliant Story. :)

That was absolutely wonderful. Perfect.

I'm big on hyperbole, but I think it's justified (...which would make it not hyperbole? It's late, my apologies).

Wahh this was so cute! XD

;_; Loved it. Are you still writing? Tell me you are! Xo

Great story, it sounds like it will be really interesting!

Just wondering though if you're planning on updating this, because your profile sounds a bit like you've left fictionpress. If not, ah well, it was good as a one-shot too.

Hey! I reviewed this story ages ago, but I thought I'd come by and read it again. I still love it just as much as the first time around-more, even, because now I realize just how much actual talent it takes to come up with something this beautiful and perfect-sounding. I really do hope that you update eventually. Be well, and good luck with whatever you're doing in life.

Wow, absolutely fantastic! I hope it won't be too much longer till you update next. I heart it!

I am speechless. I loved this so much, loved everything (which is weird because I can usually find at least one thing in every story that turns me off - but anyway).

Anyway, I absolutely adore your style and characters. It's all very .. teenage-y. In a good way. Your story just makes me want to believe them when they say these are the best years of your life, y'know?

I'm horrible at reviews ('sup lurker?), but yeah. Good job. :)

Wow - just wow. I like this a lot, because it has so much feeling in it and its simple and nice... :] Just... wow.

WoW! This was super hot! And believe me, despite what Peter and James might think, it wasn't the temperature outside! They seem really awesome and SUPER cute! They are so awkwards sometimes! They are absolutely adorable! Keep up the awesome work! I'll be in check! I love how you mention what they did when they were kids and the whole Superman thing was a fantastic idea! You totally have something sweet going here!

Hmm... interesting start. I'm feeding my addiction, so shall have to check out anything else you have written before I go to bed and die. Loves Peter and James, do hope you write more of this soon.-Fei

*stares in awe* Woah. My mind is sort of addled from too much homework-I decided to read this first chapter as an "I'm halfway done" treat-so I apologize if I get ranty, or if this review is pointless.

However. I would like to say that this chapter is one of the best things I have ever read on FictionPress, in all the years I've been on this site, reading slash story after slash story. Your style is gorgeous. EVERYTHING about this chapter was perfectly tense, perfectly hot-in every definition of each word. I loved it. So much.

I can't let myself read more until my homework is done, so there probably won't be another review for a while yet, but let me reiterate. You rock. So. Frickin. Hard. *bows down*

i have 32. or is it 33? *but who's counting*

anyway...this was sweet. and now i feel all sweaty too. damn it. *laughs*

and i just watched kill bill v.2, and there was that superman conversation, so that was all i could think about when i read this. except for the kissing, that was great. (chapped lips and all)

That was a really cute coming-of-age story. I think these two are sweet.

I have a story or two that you may find interesting. I dunno if you'll like them, but you can let me know (please? *eager grin*) if you do. Many are mXm.