This is great, I love it. It reads really well. Good job.

Eep! I love this story! Update soon! I just want to glomp James and Peter and the Superman undies... D

That was really well written really different...

I like... I hope there is more.

o this is a great up the great work _

~gal

fabulous! could stand alone, but i'm thrilled you're going to write more. YAY!

hey, i really like this so far. the characters are so cool and you're style of writing in this is neat. you better keep this going...or i won't have anything else to read after school. ;D

awe. i'm glad you came back to write slash. you always write great this was no exception. i loved it and i hope to see more soon!

Wow. You 'give up' slash for like two months, and then you write the most fantastic story ever.

You should give up slash more often.

But anyway, I liked the repition of " He knew," and the feeling of wanting to go back to childhood. And the tension between them was good. It wasn't like super sexual or anything, it was just like this tension that needs to be broken but both of them are to scared to break it, but then it does break and...

It was just a really good story, and you should most defintly continue this and write LOTS more.

So adorable, please update soon X

The imagery in this was fantastic. I could feel myself sweating, I was mouthing every word, and I had Superman and comic books and nothing to worry about, because it's months until school is starting. I loved the repetetion, it made the story seems so much more important, and it made the theme so much stronger. One doesn't get to read a story this good very often.

Well, you asked for recomendations, so I have to suggest Dom Luka on , I'm currently a big fan of his...that, and almost anything on my favorites list.

It does work as a one-shot, but I rather would like to see more. It's so rare that I find well written m/m on fictionpress. And as don't much like reading het (boring, it seems) I don't read much actual fiction on this site. You give me hope.