Wow!

It's really too early to have a favorite character besides Ethan, but I suspect Danielle may be one of my favorites... lol. Maybe.

Update soon!

yay. sweet stuffi very much like your writing style. flows very nicely. keep up the awesome work

Rabbits are so cute! Ahahah I love your humor, I love this story, I'm so glad you're writing again!

I'm going to be totally and wildly unexpected and root for Kelly, mostly because I'm so different from her, and I feel that she's such interesting character...or maybe because that section on her reads like I wrote it myself. Good job, Tess! And I like Alexandra, she's funny and unable to put her dress on. Kelly and Alexandra should become friends and fight and make brownies.

I want Emily to go. I know I should say Katherine, especially because she sucks at life and all, but I think she's funny, and there are so many more opportunities to use her idiocy later on in awesome thunderdome battles.

And yes, English accents are hot. Spot on, my friend, spot on.

I love the idea of voting people off! Makes it much more interesting. I'm wondering though, do you already have someone chosen?

I know we don't vote yet, but so far Cara, Maggie, Jenna, Emily, and Katherine are the ones I'm hoping will go.

I really like the start to this story. And I agree with your opinion about reality TV shows. They are so stupid, phony and fake. I still watch them though when nothing else is on, lol. And I love english accents, too, soon!-manda rose

awesome story

Thank you so much for giving profiles on the contestants. All the other stories I've read like this so far are no where near as well prepared as yours. I’m truly greatly for the info as I can never connect the right actions with the right people. -Aribella

I think the majority of your characters are already more intriguing and complex than 95% of the ones that really are on TV. They are much much much more likeable (ha-most of them), and much more interesting to consider

So is Mon one of the girls?

lol a few errors i notice as i'm reading:

"those who had lost a loved one to breath cancer,"as funny as that is... that's a typo for breast cancer, rite?

neways, story's good so far :D

Awesome new chapter. I bow in your greatness. It's probably going to be hard trying to think of who to eliminate.

I read some of your reviews and your readers are all so divided. I find that pretty funny.

I put my dear little vote on Natalie. She's a real gem.

very good... however i have only one thing to comment on kinda food for thought. i was wondering arent we all going to vote off Katherine first cuz we see her as her a meany instead of how she's going to act with Ethan... i assume she'll act differently. how is that going to be fair cuz we get to see who they truly are. ethan sees the mask they wear. isnt he the one that gets to pick who stays and who goes to? or at least have some say to who he's going to marry?

Winter

loved this chapter! seriously, i think it's very creative of you to actually do/ write this story- and to be able to write it well ;) ;) i've made up my mind though, on who has to go first :D can't wait for your next update!

I like how this is going. Ethan is very likable. The girls..well, lets just say that some of them better get out soon. Do you already have "the one" picked out or is it all voting? I've heard about mugglecast but not heard it yet. Please update soon!