Reviews for waiting for the mangoes
emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
i love you! and must say that i feel exactly the same. good old moinuddin kutty is sending of his keral grown best but they have not bliddy arrived yet. the second half of this is among your best ever
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
The last line just really brought a little feeling of uplifting. Mangoes brought a sense of exotic to the boring. Great subtlety.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
This really captures the anticipation well. I like the pace of this, it helps to create the distinct parts of the work. Well written.