Reviews for Hypocrite
VELVETxKISSES chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
stein auf baby, stein auf.
promisesarelies chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
i know what you're talking about. great work!
brokendown doll chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
LOVED IT! Just the words I would say.
Anecdotes Of The Arcane chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
ive tried to find something "constructively critisising" to say, but i couldnt find anything :S hah, amazing poem btw, love it. Sounds like the same thing which happened to a friend of mine XD
Jezsh chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
I think this piece is good. The emotions are well expressed, although straight-forward and I like the defiance of the tone.

However, I'd say that from about halfway through to the end of the poem you kind of lost momentum. It's not as snappy as the first bit I think. Also you might want to revise you rhyme a little, some lines are a bit too long. I hope this helps some.

Nice piece, keep writing.
sides-of-magic chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Yes, isn't high school fun...Nice done. I can relate it :D.