Neat idea! It has lots of room for development into a longer novel.

One thing, though. Wouldn't most people panic at the sight of someone transforming so obviously? I understand the necessity, but maybe some "crowd reactions" would be good.

The little flashback was good: it tells you why on earth Nolan has the powers he has. But more would be good, albeit hard to fit into a short story.

Keep up the good work!phantom_jedi

This is awesome. I was intrigued by both the title and the summary-how could a man with no face have more than two faces? Anyway, it's great; the idea behind it and the writing. I got a clear picture of everything in my head, but it wasn't overdone; sometimes I find that people will over-describe when trying to improve their writing, but, really, I think it distracts from the plot. I found a few mistakes, stuff like, "iris's" where it should have been "irises", but other than that, well done.

a couple typos, but otherwise it's well done. I enjoyed reading it. i'd like to definitely hear more from it. Why is it only a one-shot? Would you care to write more of it later? In any case, the characters were interesting, though in a short story you can at least tell what a person is like, you know, their actual character development, and I felt like that was lacking. I mean...is Nolan sarcastic? Devious? Sincere? Blunt? Quiet and pensive? You didn't do much to expand on his character, though you had ample opportunities to. I would have liked to read more of what he and...Rajita, i believe, were like. However, the story line was cool. You gave the appropriate details and information, and now all that the reader is left with is a desire to find out more about the characters and see what's going to happen next. Care to tell us, oh author...ess... XD Cya!

Interesting, and enjoyable. You also seemed to cover all the bases: how he got his 'powers,' who the enemy is, why he cares, hinting that there may be more to his abilities that even he doesn't yet understand. All in all, I think it's a pretty decent short. I would definitely like to see a continuation, but yes, please finish Co8Y first. Bye!