|Reviews for Realising|
| Poison Ember chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Thanks for sharing such a personal poem. It was lovley.
| Renm chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
100% Love it, thanks anna the best for me.
| A Rose in Weeds chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
love this piece. so personal yet a feeling/emotion/experience i think some of us all have felt/seen in our parents. thank you for posting it. so very beautiful.
| Archia chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
I really liked this, sometimes it's the personal things that help you write the best. I like how the story behind this resolves in a good way. Well done.
| Amanda M. Lynn chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
This one is the most powerful I've read of yours so far. Keep up the good work.
| Frenchie-chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
This is quite a good poem, and obviously very personal, as you said. Thanks, I quite liked it!
| Zigellus chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
You send these poems to her? They're all so passionate. Damn someday I hope to get as good as you. :)
| View from the Windowsill chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Oh my... wow. Thats personal, and just amazing. if you wrote this quite a while ago then you were a very, very good writer back then.
| LoSt ReMeDy chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I love this seriously It's sad how that happens well at least things seem (at the looks of your poem) things are getting better so best wishes!
Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy
| IndiaLikeTheCountry chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
This nearly made me cry.
It makes so much sense, I love how you've managed to put things into words so neatly that most people struggle to articulate at all.
It's clearly very personal, and all the better for it.
I wanted to send you a message thanking you for the comment on my poem 'The End', as well. It's the first time I've let people read what I write, and I'm really nervous. Yours was the first comment I got, so thanks.
| missboo13 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This really is what poetry is all about. Writing from your heart and saying your feelings. Thank you so much for posting it.
| TeapotLid chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
being so personal it's only right that the wording is very straight-forward, and I congratulate you on your bravery for putting such personal material on without a hint of a veil or metaphor to hide it behind! i doubt i could do that. it's extremely moving, well done.
| masafumi chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
I like how you used "sharp needles/injecting sadness...", I think it's very poetic. And your Australian spelling adds to that personal point, just thought I'd say that. :)
| Simfreak111 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
| Sephira Lysa chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
thats really good...lots of deep feelings...those are always the best poems...and the best poets are the ones that can get into thier feelings...great job keep it up!