|Reviews for Realising|
| AquaDrops025 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow, This is a great poem. I understand it is very personal, but i see you wrote from the heart. Keep writing!
Btw, thank you for the review on my poem:Shattered Friendships. I appreciated it.
| Pumpkin4565 chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
nice job, not excellent but nice
| DannyDangerous chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Beautiful, very beautiful. I felt power in your words.
| I-hate-every1 chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
this poem is show very much how i feel sometime...all my mother sees in me is my father...
| loveshouldnthurt chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
sad yet optomistic!
| lyricist87 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Hi. First off, I'd like to thank you for reviewing my poem. I'm reviewing yours now, and I'm glad that I took the time to come and read up on you a bit. I liked this a lot. It made me kinda sad though. But, also it was really well written too. Sad is just the emotion that I got from it. also, hopeful. Well... thanks again, and you keep writing I should give that poem to my friend? I wouldn't have the courage. I'll just ignore her. lol
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
this is a really great peice, i can tell it's personal, but it's written very well, and expresses your feelings so well i hope your mother has had the chance to read it, great work, keep it up, thank you so much for sharing, and thank you for the review
| fairEtales chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
This is cute. I love the idea: very sweet and something to make you smile. But, I think that it sounds like a story, really, just chopped up into lines. I feel like you just wrote a paragraph and made it into a poem. Maybe if it lost the...flowing-sentence-y like touch to it, it would sound more like a poem...just a thought. I think I might even like it better as just a short little prose piece. Anyway, nice job. Thx for the reviews!
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
| Dying Rose chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Always takes a bit of courage to post these super-personal ones up. You have done a wonderful job expressing yourself in this poem. The wording is painfully gentle in places, and yet carressingly rough in others. It's a beautiful piece. Great job, and keep writing!Thanks for reviewing my work!Ashley
| shadowed face chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
The greatest of inspirations come from the pain of the past. well written.
| Kaye90 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
i love how your poems just say what they want to say straight out, not masked by imagery, and yet still sound and feel like poetry. i've tried that, and it never works for me. bravo, moved me. i dont want to try to describe how it moved me, because it will sound trite and take away from the reality of the poem and how it did move one other thing: the number of reviews you receive AMAZES me. how on EARTH do you do it?your fan,kaye90
| Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I really like this. I love the depth.
| secret-of-eternal-life chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I understand what you mean by very personal. You have expressed perfectly the pain these kinds of things always cause. An unique piece of feeling and poetry. (I can relate...)
| Poinky chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Such a personal peom, but it is amazing. Im happy that everything is now fine for you :3 Keep writing! P.S- Thanksfor all your reviews!