|Reviews for The Red Man|
| EliMerriman chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Has a Poe-ish rhythm to it. This is well written and executed, and I've always loved this rhyming scheme (free-verse is my favourite to write, but varies too greatly in quality). The one part I didn't like in the poem was the inclusion of the words "satus quo". It doesn't seem to fit the mood or the diction. Other than that, amazing.
| McGonagall's Bola chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Oh shit, I don't understand half of these words...only makes me realize that I still still have a long, long way to go to graps the English language. I love the mentioning of Lucifer (basically all these ancient gods and goddesses..) I like this piece of poetry a lot! The rhymes are mysterious to me, but that only make sit all the more impossible to stop reaidng, it drives you further to each more line. I love the use of the old English, too.
| Elegant Raven chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
I really loved reading this. Interesting format. Most writers don't use it. ABCD etc. Very different. Loved it though. It was very appealing and really helped with the rhythm and flow.
| Peter Harrison chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
I really liked this poem too! It's an interesting rhyming scheme (ABCB etc.), one that I have never written a poem to but now I want to! Great work! You used a lot of appropriate words to set the mood.
| flashlitdarknessxx chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
WOW! I really really like this! great job!
| jpromero chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
I didn't manage to find any sort of rhythm in this piece.
Also, your rhymes had no sceme, and you sort of rhymed whenever you felt like it.
I would have to honestly and blatantly say I didn't like it.
| myheartwantsyou chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
this is great. it reminds me vaguely of the raven by edgar allen poe. very good.
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I enjoy reading your work!
| DCLehnsherr chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
My God that is amazing and i mean that. I love the way each of the lines flows into the next. It has such an old feel to it like i think it's Edgar Allen Poe (can't be sure though).
All in all i just love this. Brilliant and amazing work keep it up _