|Reviews for Suicide in G minor|
| Shes Never Known Happy chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
i love this itsd very beautiful and you paint a perfect picture
| WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
'Why do you hesitate with the knife
when we both know that you are already killing me.' That was such a powerful line. My definite favorite.
This was really sad-not the writing, I mean it made ME sad. The talk about how she was a model girl, and how you flashed the title at the end...it just really worked out. I applud you, my vixen.
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
I really liked the feel of this poem. The flow of it was really good...plus it goes really good with the song I'm listening to right now. ) I really liked the line about 'dreaming in shades of grey' because that is truly a beautiful touch. The title was also really pretty cuz I love songs that are written in a minor key. They're just so much more fun to play compared to major keys. ) Keep up the awesome work!
| Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Love the title, love your work.
| empathic life chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Nice title, deary. You spelled knife "knofe" in one line, and I think you meant there instead of these in another. . . but that's just the future English teacher running rabid. Very good. I liked it. Nice rhythym and such. Another un-rhyming piece. You've done a lot of those lately. I don't think this is your best work, but I've really no room to talk. I do love the title. -Alex
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
The questioning aspects of this brings out a marvelous sense of truly not knowing the answers, which is a difficult concept to get across, but you've done wonderfully in this. It creates a scenario, and questions its own or the speaker own involvement in it. The depth to the thought process in developing this is excellent. Very complex and well written. Good work. MD
| DCLehnsherr chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Now that is a powerful poem of regret and loss. Everyhting is put together so wonderfully and i like the way you change tact part way through going from a block paragraph to seperate stanzas to show different periods of time and places.
Excellent work well done _