Reviews for We’re On To Better Things I Hope
Cait Street chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
pretty friken awsome!
candyaddict chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I love this. I can completely connect to it somehow. XP I love the first two lines as well. gives a great impact of a first impression.
burning kisses chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
holy gacheezy tomatoe lettuce! this is amazing. it so sad and ironic. especially that whoever it is is killing you with happiness. it too much work to dig yourself a grave and its so sad that that is whats left for you to do. ah. i promise our real lives wont end like that. ill dig your grave. jk. i love how you use the word "babe." it makes the whole poem so personal and more soft. keep it up! ~
Thareth chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
nicely done. i like it
fairEtales chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
B-E-A-UTIFUL! Love it, as with all of your other "works."
slinkytool34629 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
gah... this poem just pulled at me. I especially love how it started off, but my favorite line is "you're killing me with kindness". great poem
in theory chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
I agree totally with your AN: most of the stuff I post isn't plotted or planned or even formatted it just is. And the first handful of lines was powerful, it became a little like a story halfway through and less like a poem but it still worked for me. Nice work.