Reviews for Static
just dani chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
i like it, its short but there's something about it...keep writing
LadyRainStarDragon chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
This one made me laugh. I know it's about love, but sometimes I feel exactly this way.

"but at least you aren't coming in clear . . ."

That's my favorite line. When they start coming in clear is when disillusionment really rips at you.
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Quite a picture you've painted with just 18 words. Well done.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
great poem- i love the meaning in it and the metaphor. awesome job ;)