Reviews for Petrogradia
Ainu chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I'm so glad I found it. )

I love your writing style.
BlueRose218 chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
friggin...wow. so true, how fast greed decends. I love the imagry and the connection of 'freedom' with night. great poem!
Bloodsinger chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Yay, someone who does justice to Russia and its history! Finally someone who acuatually cares something called ACCURATE INFORMATION!

sorry about that, but, as you know, I am absolutely sick and tired of lazy writers.

Okay, so anyway, the poem. Absolutely beautiful and so very true. The imagery and metaohors are great and do a nice job a painting a picture.
Shara G chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
The imagery is great and I like these lines best: "Our wages weigh our pockets down/ With greed with want with more:/And every ruble needs another." They're pretty well-detailed, and the ending makes sense.
Bananas in a Blender chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
I really like this one- the description fits the mood of the poem.

I also liked: "...routinely/ Wanting more and needing less"

Brilliant.

(And I loved the last line, but that's a given.)

Great job-
Thurayya chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Beautiful; the imagry waa great, and the last line completely summed it up.

Funny how the Communists were so hypocritical. -;

Good job on this; watch out for typos, though.

- ala