Some of the most awesome characters I've seen in a while. They resonated with me. I love love love Henry and Wolf. And the troublemakers! Just wonderful.

: )

Now that is one story that needs a sequel, just awesome, too good a storyline to stop here.

I wonder, is this set in Scotland? Because there's a place called moray, the clans and calling him a laird, also there seem to be some similarities between the discord between England and Scotland here.

I thought it was cute. I think I might have liked a bit more interaction between Henry and wolf before the part where he ran off into the woods by himself. And maybe a bit more about Henry's background, mayhap in the form of a conversation between him and wolf (but that's probably more to do with the fact that that's one of my favoured conversations..)

Um, yeah. I really like this story though , and I've read it a couple times idk I just thought it was good. :)

very cute : ) love the detail in Henry's past. and the loyalty of his knights. so sweet!

I really really like this story, and I really really hate Henry's family, especially his brothers. The way you wrote this kind of makes it seem as though there would be more chapters added to it, so will you please continue this story? *looks at the author with adorable puppy eyes while holding out a boquet to her in one hand and holding a knife sharper than a scalpel (a knife used by darkers that can cut through bone as well as skin and muscles all in a manner of seconds [I am not insulting anyone's intelligence, but I know people who don't know what a scalpel is])*

How sweet! I really like this story!

I like this one. A few grammar mistakes here and there but I love the way you crafted the world and it's characters and Henry's obliviousness! It'd be great if you could write about the other's powers. I like supernatural stuff like that. But awesome story anyway. :D

That was such a good story. I love Henry. He's just so cute!

LOVED IT

Gotta love an entire clan that adores practical jokes. )

Did you know? You have a manner of writing wherein you'll write something completely spectacular, keep it completely spectacular, and then end it in a completely unspectacular and unsatisfactory way. I absolutely appreciate the fact that you write oneshots and thus deplete the need to stalk, threaten to maim and otherwise wait for the next "installment" of the story, but I think a little more at the end would be nice.

I'd be really interested in reading what happens next: do they actually wipe the place from the map, evade Edward's tyranny and end up opening a can of mucho whoopla-o? Does Henry actually train his "spirit"? How does Alex and Henry's relationship take place with the fact that they're both of major roles in their situation? Would they keep it hidden knowledge, or would it be open? It drives me nuts that you just leave things like that, because it's always so short and abrupt and completely unfulfilling that I want to rip my hair out! Not cool.

Ironically enough, I liked how you ended this one, because it's open enough to be completely vague, but pointed enough to hint at what could happen.

But yeah, that's my advice, I guess: work on the endings so that they don't come off as abrupt and final, a bit more character interaction and... keep up with the unmaiming?

Thanks for the read!

Ek I love the ending of the story! It's too cute.

Very cute and sweet.

great job!

Very cute :)