Reviews for The Rainfall
Brian chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Dude! this was sweet! i loved it. the end was what made it all worth while. it was really good. the way it just ended right there was really good and the way you used the rain to get across the dark work of a hired gun was really good. and just ending it there made it very good. it made me yearn for more and left me with a sense of mystery. sweet story dude!
YepImRu chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
I like this. As previously stated, it kept me reading. Good work. ;)
Badger250 chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Nice work. You kept everything nice and vague until the end. I think that helped me keep my attention into the intro while you explain the beginning. I really like the first sentence too.