|Reviews for realization|
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
you make me melt.
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
"take a sip
of summer when it grows dark."
I particulary like that bit. The images in this piece are extraordinary.
| elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
So sweet, but cleverly so. I love the way you played with words and images in the first stanza-really drew me in. Nicely done.
| rightclick5ave chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
O-M-G! fave! drowning in all those pretty words. & i loved how it rhymes subtly. (but it only takes one look / to notice there's just / you and me.) *heart breaks* ):
| i heart that guy chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
ah..i love it. absolutely love it. the imagery in the first stanza made my heart stop for a moment while i read it. beautiful.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
this is sweet. that's the first and only thing that went through my mind while reading it. beautiful.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
omg *dies* il have to add it my faves :D
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Aw, that was romantic. The first stanza was funky. I liked it. Very pretty and sweet and free-flowing.
| ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Beautiful imagery and a delightful poem...and the message is especially relevant to me. ;)
| forsakensmile chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Us romantics deserved a poem like this.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Beautiful, awesome write.
| Naibz chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
pretty good. keep writing. thanks for the review btw.
| Margot Tenenbaum chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
I LOVE .tragic, yet romantic at the same time.*claps*just my cup of tea.
| boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
This is a sweet poem. I like the first full stanza the best. Great job.
Oh, and happy first day of Spring (a little late, I know).
| bright horizon splash chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Oh my gosh, I LOVE it. absolutely amazing, especially the first stanza. Simply lovely, keep writing!