Reviews for Hearts of Night
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Wauw! Absolutely amazing piece you have here Hawke! I loved the line 'broken pieces can still bleed'..It's one of those lines where you just wanna steal it, cuz it's so good and so true! Of course I'd never do that, but you know what I'm tryin to say eh? Ok, I'll shut up now _

Much love, Rosanna.
ginnyellen chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Nights,girl. This was truly a beautiful poem, y really like the way you wrote this one in particular. I enjoyed every metaphor. Specially when you refer to stars as "crystalline tears" ...that added so much emotion to the poem (in my opinion)

Great poem!

Lots of love..

GiNnY eLlEn
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Bold move experimenting with style. I think you did very well and did this form of poetry justice. The metaphor remains constant and the flow solid. It is a very nice poem.