Reviews for Deception
KnightOfBurgers chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
Annabell Lee chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
The cold form fits well the cold subject.
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Simple - but with still enough complexity to make the notion stick in my head - there has to be life burrowing underneath the ground all the time, otherwise we would never see the seasons change. Like that saying that just when one season begins you can already start to notice the next one settling in. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
Elements Arise chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Fascinating...I love how it questions the duration of life.
lxpetrik chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
You could almost mistake this for a haiku. Very vivid, I love the desolate feeling in this one.
White-Necromancer chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
not sure what is it about this but its really captivating. Well written and with a strong message.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I like this poem, it seems to be saying the opposite of what other people are... or maybe it's just my imagination.I read your other poem spray It's cool too but I think you can add to it, because you haven't put it under haiku.

thanks for your review, I apricate it... really I do.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
ohh, chilling & so vivid.
Calenheniel chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
This really struck a chord with it! Def. faving it.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
flowers often die regardless of snow

but it reminds me of this poem that won this contest i was in a while back

daisies in the snow. not fair.
Johana chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Aw, this is a very sad piece that can be interpreted beyond the simple beauty that is nature.

Good job.
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Hey there my opinion this is a very bleak poem. For some reason my brain keeps on saying, "it's very brown" so ya, take that however you wish. again not the traditional haiku but I still like it :) I noted that you considered it "spiritual/tragedy"...I must agree I see the tragedy easily but the spiritual is more of a streach for me...I think I see it though..
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Well...this was deep! I love it!

AgentFade2Black chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Woah...the combination of words so eloquently put together...I'm thouroughly impressed.
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