You are a master of haiku hehehe. Seriously, this is a hard form because it is so simple. I really like your style and the imagery here is lovely. I also like the italics _

the beach? i dunno, but this was well written. nice detail.

you can write haiku. mean haiku, seriously. peerless with these things.

the fastasy imagery was excellent. swirl around my toes brought to a relatable level, though, and was probably the best line of the poem. along with the first and second. :)

love, .

your haikus are amazing! how do you do that? (i'm so jealous...) i like how you have such a short, yet catching title!

This one brings such a clear picture to my mind...wow.

I adore this - I have such an obsession with dragons! The image of water spirits & dragons swirling around your toes is fantastic. It's just perfect the way it is.

that had a nice image to it.

Now this one I love - I've always found the idea of water spirits fascinating - like the image of ghosts trapped in water is just a very tasty image for my imagination and I like the added detail about dragons, I can see the reality of you seeing this as you are, as well as the fantastical quality of this taking place in some far off world. Loved it!

Juliet.

deep ends of pools and sadness.

drinks and drunk.s.

i like it

Okay...I know I said I would never leave a "good job" only review...but I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like this one just as is! :D Good job!

I love this! Hum...I don't know what else to say right now other than it was well written!

~xoxo~