Reviews for Diction
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
i want this on my page, quoted! haha, cheers-rabbit
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Hm...I'm not sure I get it... But I'm no master interpreter.

Still, beautifully written, as always.
Liliot chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
As simple as this is, it was very appealing. I think I'm actually inspired now to do something similar with the spacing like that.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
oh wow. its so short but saying everything. wonderful work.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I really like this - it's a solid thought in that it makes since and I actually entered this thought process but still I feel like I've read that notion before - like it's not a new revelation to me, maybe because I am a writer to. The writing was good, but the idea, maybe not so up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
lxpetrik chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Your right, it does require a second-third or sixth read. Lol, I get it. I like this, C'est minngone!
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
like poetry...lovely job.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
reminds me of alice in wonderland, wonderfully it does

what a wonder we have found ourselves in a dream
Loup17 chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
ooOOoo, i LiKe that po~em. i think the title was perfect for it .. sometimes the world of writing and words is far far better than reality
ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
having fun with spaces today, are we? LOL I like this piece but the title...I dunno, I know what diction is, and I understand the poem, but it just doesn't seem like a very good title for this one. Maybe something more like "Writing" or "Fiction" (though to be honest I'm not a big fan of those titles either)
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
I like this one! Great Job!

toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
although its really short and simple it still had a powerful message. good job. i liked it!
in theory chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
I love this idea, tackled it differently a long time ago. (would value your opinion, it's called "Scribble" might have to search for it it's old)

and yeah, it's something I'm fascinated by, you described it so succintly. Awesome work.