Reviews for Soggy Mind
a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
i love the way you wrote this. the title suits it. i love it . . . especially since you mentioned maple syrup. yum.
My New Pen Name chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Another great one, interesting imagery and word choice. "Tender fingertips

& grotesque explosions filtered

Through my pores" is awesomely powerful. . . I like it! : D