Reviews for I long
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
This is so sad, lovely writing. You summed up that feeling so perfectly.
Arisnoe chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
wow. that summed up how i felt towards a boy last year! oh yeah. you capture so much emotion in this poem. great job. how come i never noticed this one before...? *sighs* sorry.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Oh wow, I know almost exactly how you feel. Man, just thinking bout it...erg. Sorry, it is a great poem, and you just got my emotions all wacked out again. Don't worry, it's a good thing, i think. haha, good job.
jasna-krystal chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
heya it's me krystal_jasna..with another acct. anywayx...

i like this poem alot..you can feel the longing, the love and yet a subtle hint of pain. it is very well written :) one of my favourites :)